1. I did like them because I thought they focused on something greater than the subject it was written about. They did adhere to the properties of a good feature story but they also gave all the who, what, when, where. I like the JFK story better because I liked it's original take on the subject. I would describe Breslin's writing as similar to a fiction author. I would say it's very effective because it engages the reader and makes them forget that they're reading a news story. I think that if I applied some of the tactics that Jimmy Breslin used, using misdirection to give important details, I would write better fiction.
2. -Tell a story
-Be attention grabbing/strong lead
- Avoid first and second person
-Don't state the obvious/unique angle
-Don't use cliches
-Pay attention to your transitions
-Use quotes
- still provide the 5 Ws and H
- powerful ending
-Description and detail
Good job on both. 100x2
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